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PostSubject: Waiting forever   Thu Aug 06, 2009 10:34 pm

Listen to the song "Waiting Forever" here

http://www.myspace.com/andrewcomposer
(my other, much older songs can be ignored. I'll be redoing them.)

This song started as a improvisation on the scale of B Pure Minor on the piano. From there, after finding out that what I was playing sounded AWESOME, I recorded it into acid pro 7, and added the Cello and Viola synths, which ended up being the major part of the song carrying the melody.

I would love feedback on this song, if you could please.

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PostSubject: Re: Waiting forever   Thu Aug 06, 2009 10:55 pm

While I dont listen to that style of music, I did quite like it. It was nice and relaxing, and was well composed, I thought (though my knowledge of composition is nil, I'll admit). The cello went well with the piano, and the melody was really nice.
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PostSubject: Re: Waiting forever   Sat Aug 08, 2009 12:04 am

I think it was composed well too. But if you ever wanted to get critical on my composing style, you'll find that I didn't compose this to match a formal song format (such as ABC, ABABCB, AAA (the different letters means different sections of the songs)). In fact I nearly improvised the whole song. However, the song does closely resemble the ABC song format, with a few exceptions.

Is there anyone who took music theory that would like to take a whack at my song?

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PostSubject: Re: Waiting forever   Sat Aug 08, 2009 4:42 pm

I know some music theory from my guitar teacher (he majors in music theory, dude's a music theory fanatic), if I could play embedded videos on myspace I would give it my best shot, but my comp's software is pathetic like that, unfortunately

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PostSubject: Re: Waiting forever   Sun Aug 09, 2009 7:47 pm

Email address? I could send it to you that way.

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PostSubject: Re: Waiting forever   Mon Aug 10, 2009 5:56 am

Aye, tis in me profile

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PostSubject: Re: Waiting forever   Sun Aug 23, 2009 12:15 am

I liked it alot. It was very well done.
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